Focus Group Feedback on Draft Trailer

From our findings from the questionnaire sent out to 100 people from our school we found that the main target audience age fell between 15-18. We asked a select range of students from our school to be part of our focus group, they all fall between the select age range and there is an equal ratio of males to females to watch the draft film trailer and give us feed back and their opinons on what could make this stronger. As they are our target audience and we wish to impress them and satisfy their needs their opinions are extremely important to collect.


Eloise de Carvalho -15


"The order of shots in the trailer were jumbled up too much and didn't create a flowing sequence that was understandable. There was also some large gaps in the plot and unnecessary repetition."

Thomas Hobbs -18

Paige Farrell -17

"The ending shot wasn't strong enough to create a lasting impression, you should think about including some credits, however I really liked the opening sequence.


  "Some of the shots dragged on, it would have been better if the pace was increased by cutting shots sooner."

Henry George -16

"Some of the transitions didn't help move the story forward, they were to snappy. You should also work on making your cuts smoother, like when Topaz Specter kicks the door open."

Bella McCrimmon -18

"You need to include strong background music, maybe you should consider narration or text to help the audience understand the story, I know it would have helped me."

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Liam Wraxton -15






"The characters need to be introduced, especially the superheros as we never actualy learnt what they are called."